Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you well, what a surprise! Man! The pen and paper can’t explain my feelings and the joy I have upon receiving such a beautiful gift.
I was nowhere expecting that you could send a present which I desired most. But when the postman said, “Present from Canada to Mr. Rashid.” I was on cloud Nine! And as soon I unwrapped it, I jumped in scream. I remember it was we together saw it while we were shopping in the city center mall when I was on holiday with you. Such a rollicking wrist watch masterpiece of excellent workmanship as gift from you I love it! Love you man!
As you could see the watch is multi feature it not only shows time but also connects with any of your android mobile device from there you can access your mobile device. It is handy when you are on the move. I will just show off my friends and will impress my girlfriend with such disruptive, robust technology and style.
Take care and thank you once again.
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- Prevention is better than cure.Researching and treating diseases are too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. 61
- Write a letter to invite a famous person to give a speech at a meeting in you youth club. In your letter, you should:• introduce your club• explain why you want to invite him/her• tell him/her about the arrangement for the meeting 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46153846154 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45180571948 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6054726855 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351326472894 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154366810236 0.0766984524023 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860054803661 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206630232313 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319703016402 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.