University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
In the informational era, the advancements in education and various types of education programs has great impact on the job market, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although some people contest that University's degree is indispensable than University experience, others disagree with this proposition. This essay will discuss that university's degree plays a vital role in the job market as compared to the university experience.
Firstly, industries have a strict criteria in hiring employees, and in each job requirement it is clearly mention that a specific qualification is must to apply for a specific job. Furthermore, a civil engineer cannot suitable for a job which is related to programming. As a tangible instance, a person who has experience in mechanical but does not have degree of mechanical cannot work on manager level because the mechanical engineer degree is must for such vacancies. Manifestly, industries have developed some standards for hiring employees and a degree is must for applying for a certain vacancy.
Secondly, there is also government regulations for certain qualifications that can apply for jobs or apply for immigration in a country. Moreover, such countries have strict rules for evaluating their education qualification based on their rules and regulations. To cite a practical example, a skilled worker will apply for Australian immigration when he will prove that his experience matches his qualification and he has to provide evidences on it.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that university degree is required for the job market and university experience has less importance. Therefore, I staunchly opine that students should focus on getting a professional degree from the university rather than focusing on university experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'criterion'?
Suggestion: criterion
...e. Firstly, industries have a strict criteria in hiring employees, and in each job re...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'mentioned'.
Suggestion: mentioned
...d in each job requirement it is clearly mention that a specific qualification is must t...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ention that a specific qualification is must to apply for a specific job. Furthermore, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56884057971 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23859339646 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539855072464 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1674222709 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.083333333 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22158669963 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100378525821 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973037002849 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167441667619 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126555852876 0.0609392437508 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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