With the advent in science and technology, space travel is gaining an humongous popularity. Some people believes that money spent on developing space travel could be used for some more purposeful services, such as dealing with environmental issues. I partially agree with the statement that public funding should be distributed more towards major problems rather than space travel.
Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that space exploration has always fascinated human's and a huge amount of public funding is spend on such activities. Human being always wanted to colonize space and are exploring planets which are habitable. Additionally, space is also seen as a vacation spot and it is widely believed that people will spend some time in Mars or Moon as part of their vacation. Going to space require tremendous amount of money and the tools and technology used to explore space is extremely expensive and require a lot of research.
Secondly, on the opposite side, proponents argues that rather than spending money on space travel, money should be distributed in a more justifiable way and should be spend on improving health of our environment. As we are already aware about the phenomenon of climate change and the consequences attached to it but, in my opinion, nothing much is done in order to protect our environment.
Hence, in conclusion, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that space travel is also vital for our society, but, governments should analyze priorities first, a good amount of public funding needs to be indulged in dealing with environmental problems, because if environment is not valued the entire humanity is at the threat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...and technology, space travel is gaining an humongous popularity. Some people belie...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... and a huge amount of public funding is spend on such activities. Human being always ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...in a more justifiable way and should be spend on improving health of our environment....
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'propound'
Suggestion: propound
...nclusion, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that space travel is also v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18450184502 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8379814475 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6124248937 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259329777105 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106464916448 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633049111127 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161961303381 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425019536736 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.