In many countries, weddings are getting bigger and more expensive than the past. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is true that present day wedding ceremonies are grand and more materialistic as compared to past. In my opinion, it is an unnecessary squandering of money and loss of natural resources which makes it a negative development.
Nowadays, people wish to have a fairytale wedding which cost them an arm or a leg. This is because apart from buying exclusive outfits and accessories for the bride / groom, they also have to pay for providing the best hospitality to their relatives like booking a descent hotel for their stay, gifts and so on. People from high socioeconomic can afford such expenses ; however,those who belong to low socioeconomic cohort can not handle it. The later group have to give away all their savings just to make their day special and to maintain social status. Some people even take loan for this reason and are in debt for years .Indeed ,this is not a wise decision .Instead this money can be used in a better way by saving it for future emergencies or for other important work .
Moreover, such weddings causes heavy loss of our natural resources.T he main attraction of any nuptial is the delicacies offered to the guest to gorge on and the flamboyant ambience and décor of the venue. Hence, to make it a mammoth event and to show up social status no stones are kept unturned by the people . Althought the food is prepared according to the guestlist ,yet much of it is wasted as people are served liberally beyond their appetite .In current scenario, where many nations are facing scarcity of food and electricity, it is irrational to waste such useful resourses.
In conclusion, the big fat weddings have direct impact not only on our financial state but also on our valuable natural resources . Therefore , it is certainly a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85855263158 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74425139388 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2071485515 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.083333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118117663296 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434094176332 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393022192018 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741196424387 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036102549999 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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