Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Whilst some people believe that the devastating effects of human behavior on the ecosystems are unchangeable, others argue that appropriate measures can be adopted to deal with this burning issue. Though I agree that the environment has been badly damaged, I also believe that immediate actions can be performed to tackle this pressing matter.
On the one hand, there are a wide range of plausible explanations as to why many people are prone to believe that it is pointless to carry out any further actions to protect our planet. First, extreme weather events resulting from human activity are occurring all over the world. For example, unprecedented droughts in South Africa gave rise to production loss and daily blackouts. The thick poisonous smog also blanketed Beijing as a result of human behavior. These phenomena have caused serious harm to not only human beings but also animals and plants. Second, urban sprawl led to clear-cutting and deforestation resulting in loss of forest and habitat fragmentation. Third, overharvesting ecosystems has given rise to the depopulation of a multitude of species, especially in the fishing industry. Consequently, the populations of these animals were dramatically decreased.
On the other hand, it can be argued that effective actions can still be taken to protect our environment and well-being. For instance, governments can set aside land for parks. Accordingly, plants and animals in parks could be protected from human activities. People are not allowed to disturb the habitats inside park lands. Similarly, other activities such as fishing, hunting, mining, and drilling for oil might also be prohibited in these park lands. In addition, the governments can also impose laws to protect the ecosystems and habitats. For example, the laws can limit the number of trees that can be cut down in forests and help to protect the air and water from contamination.
In conclusion, whilst there are some convincing explanations as to why the ecosystems have been harmed severely, I sincerely believe that decisive actions might be carried out to safeguard our species and their habitats.
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 61
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 11
- In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring.To what extent do you agree? 73
- International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited.Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? 78
- Some people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising their children, and therefore the government should support them financially. Do you agree or disagree? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, second, similarly, so, still, third, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30088495575 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94833294194 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560471976401 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9691252108 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126463932962 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412201007761 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433161500486 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757397145869 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242165127053 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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