More than ever, television has emerged to be an integral part of our daily lives. It provides both entertainment and awareness to current affairs. People are divided on their opinion on the benefits we get from watching television. Some believe that it only accompanies a person to help them overcome boredom and loneliness. Others believe that it is more than just a companion, they believe that television transcends culture and social interaction. This essay will discuss how television affects our societies and individual lives.
First, television shows are a paramount source of interesting news and shows that it's a good company for people. Television shows provide different and varied stimuli to people that entices the imagination. For example, senior adults in nursing care are allowed to watch television for a few hours a day to keep them company and entertained. This is a tangible evidence that televisions can be a good company to people.
Second, television elevated the way we communicate and interact with each other by improving how we disseminate information and increase social awareness. Important current issues are investigated, discussed, and shared through this medium. For example, an increased awareness on climate change is due to television's influence to societies on responsible use of natural resources. Thus, television is a proven and tested way to communicate information with widespread importance.
In conclusion, televisions have accompanied us in our daily lives by providing us with entertainment but more importantly with current news and events. It made us connected to each other on a more individual level. In my opinion, we should continue to use the television as a medium to encourage social commitment and action on important issues.
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- In towns and cities, large shopping malls should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...urce of interesting news and shows that its a good company for people. Television s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4229390681 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10377709459 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8826524484 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230775934164 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693035390773 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463820789077 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130938826278 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336668519291 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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