You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:
- What repairs are you going to do?
- How will it affect the restaurant?
- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.
Dear John,
I hope you would be doing great in all respects. I am writing this letter to notify you in advance that I have planned some renovation works at my home for next couple of weeks, which might impact your restaurant and business to some extent during this duration.
I am Harry and living next door to your restaurant. As you are well aware of the heavy rainfall which happened last year and the damage it has done to the front side of my home. I got an opportunity and required bandwidth from my work schedule now to get things fixed and renovate to the appropriate level. My plan is to remove the complete front wall along with the outside gates, push the lawn to a little outwards and replace the wall with electric gates. As all the building raw materials along with bricks, mortar and gate have to be placed outside the house i.e. on road, which will definitively increase the congestion on the road. This will impact not only the vehicles but passing by people too. Not to mention it will also occupy your 1-2 parking space and i really apologies for the inconvenience.
Having said above there could be a solution if you allow me to place all the raw material at your backyard instead of keeping them on the road, as that space is fairly occupied and my home has easy access to the same too. This way we will keep your customers happy and delighted as earlier.
I hope you will understand my situation and accept my suggestion of properly utilizing the backyard. You can call me directly at 111-111-1111 anytime to discuss more on the same.
Yours faithfully
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to some extent during this duration. I am Harry and living next door to your r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59440559441 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42183289794 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7085502934 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240159100294 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735636141158 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636788468426 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153558118792 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888075944941 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.