People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world.
What are the reason for this,and how can people learn more about the natural world?
it is true that people today are getting to forget the necessary of natural world. While there are untangle reasons for this lacking of knowledge,it still has the way in which people can accelerate conscious about the natural world.
I believe that the main reasons for the importance of the natural world became almost omit is the disappearance of traditional ways of life. In term of work,hunting and agriculture are now the occupation of small minority of the workforce in the most countries. From a cultural perspective, traditional festival related to seasonal nature in which provided a link to our roots has fallen by the wayside. Advances in technology means that most people now spend a large part of their days in closed working environment,without contact with nature. For example, instead of out-door activities,children prefer doing nothing but staring at the screen of the electronic media,to which they were addicted.
However,there are a numberous method to improve public understanding of the natural world. Firstly, government should stimulate the revival of interest in the world around us by showing mor documentaries on TV or the internet,where people spend most time with. Secondly,school must include nature studies and environmental science in curriculum in order to get students a specific look of esteeming nature. With some environmentally friendly tasks,like planting trees competition among youngsters,are an excellent means of informing the public about life on the planet,and the need to combat environmental degradation,which threaten it.
In conclusion,there are reasons for people being lack of knowledge of the natural world but also the way in which this problem can be overcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, by the way, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48496240602 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4102552073 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6490415953 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370584109156 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138025904891 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117315642803 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259013956716 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108666122844 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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