Some people say that self employment is better than the job.Discuss, what is your opinion?
Modern technology has shaped the system of working from home to its present appearance. To which, some people opine that working for your own self is better than working under someone else. In my opinion, both aspects of job have different factors to account for and to get.
As for the self-employment, umpteen number of factors are present about why it is better than the job. The main one is that it becomes easier for a person to work as he/she saves a lot of time by not travelling to work along with the money. To show this concept, a recent emerging trend of freelance working is something which has made more independent and efficient at hand tasks. Except this, it also makes spending time with family quite easier and a person does not need to be under supervision of other person all the time.
Alternatively, a job offers various prospects learning new things from colleagues as well as superior mentors like senior workers. Although, on the site job requires a person to travel to and from work, however, it also brings a sense of onus on the person as he/she is working under someone and may suffer from his dire actions. To cite an example, people who usually work on jobs tend to have better communication, socialization and other skills as compared to freelancers. Another obvious benefit which can be considered is feeling co-operation that appears while working with others.
In the nutshell, both aspects have their own merits, and it is more a matter of choice than being the good or bad. For some, freelancing is better, whereas, job is much easier for others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ier for a person to work as he/she saves a lot of time by not travelling to work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, as for, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77536231884 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60925919839 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4571633946 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178637168796 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720673338686 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850783052325 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126031143125 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620849281681 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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