The given bar chart illustrates the data on the differences in the number of minutes each person did household chores per day by the sex of Great Britain.
Overall, it is clearly seen from the chart that the number of men who spent time for gardening/pet care was the highest, while cooking/baking/washing up was the most popular household chores for women.
Clearly, the amount of time of men is higher than women took part in some activities including gardening/pet care/maintenance odd jobs. To specify, males used 49.5 minutes for gardening and pet care per day, whereas few women did so, at just 21 minutes. It is also noticeable that men spent time for maintenance odd jobs account for 26 minutes per day, which was approximately triple as high as the figure of women participating in this work.
Nevertheless, women surpassed men by the number of minutes per day in the rest of the categories. In detail, it took 74 minutes for women cooking/baking/washing up per day, whereas only 30 minutes for men. Moreover, the time women used for clothes, washing/ironing/sewing/tidying/cleaning house was more than many times man did on these activities, respectively over 13 and 4 times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03553299492 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05482411434 2.65546596893 153% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573604060914 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4535234922 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921071357555 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479770319971 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042837964649 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769747790846 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380727401672 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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