You rented a car from car rental company, the air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it has still not been repaired.
- Introduce yourself
- Explain the situation
- Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding the un-cooperative behavior of your customer support for a car, which I rented almost a week ago.
I am Alex Jonhson from Gurgaon and a prime user of your car rental services. Since, your company promises quick delivery and un-compromised services, I have always preferred hiring vehicle from your company. However, this time the experience was dissatisfying.
I picked Honda Amaze, registration number MH12 kl 8923 from Pune airport and as I drove a few miles further, the air conditioner of the automobile stooped providing cooling. Considering the situation, I immediately tried reaching the road side assistance service, however, to my surprise neither nobody answered the calls nor did I receive call back from the customer service, despite leaving voice messages numerous times. As a result, I had to manage with the defective vehicle and in scorching weather, I had to drive to the office.
I am astonished by the irresponsible behavior of the staff of such a top notch service provider. The vehicle has not been used after the instance of the air conditioner ans is parked at my office, I request you to arrange a self-pick up of the same at the earliest. Additionally, I would like to have full refund of the rentals ans security fees, which I paid online in advance and that amounts to INR 23000. Moreover, I shall bear no further expenses of the defective automobile.
Looking forward for a responsive action.
Your's Faithfully,
Alex Jhonson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...onsible behavior of the staff of such a top notch service provider. The vehicle has not b...
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Line 9, column 321, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rentals'' or 'rental's'?
Suggestion: rentals'; rental's
...I would like to have full refund of the rentals ans security fees, which I paid online ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, regarding, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93307642788 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4085166501 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164027391072 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424587739149 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041737729476 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766734482064 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315295596162 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.