Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss the positive and negative impacts of this change.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people changed dramatically. A quick reflection on the a typical day reveals that change in the communication is a topics of the contemporary discussion. In this essay I will discuss some advantages of the technology in communication and the disadvantages.
To commence with, one of the major invention of technology is mobile phone. It make the communicate easy and fast. Moreover, people can communicate with their near and dear once at any time and at any place .In past it take lot of time but mobile phones are play vital role in case of emergency . Nowadays we can communicate with our friends through videocall, which is a key feature of mobile phone in communication. In this feature we can see the face of our friends on the screen of phone. The mobile phone gives great revolution in communication.
Turning towards the other side of the argument, with the advancement in technology communication has changed, which create a wide gap between the relations. It create ample of misunderstanding and decrease the bond between the people. In npast people often visit their relatives and their communication is only face to face is possible.
To conclude, the change which come in communication sector is positive but also have some disadvantages. I personally think that it is a positive development as it make our life fast.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97457627119 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14110012521 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53813559322 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6345019714 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 7.25397266985 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15288120628 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568808180594 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509434447619 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106728255189 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586426094708 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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