The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012
The line graph shows unemployment status in rural areas and urban areas as percentage in Australia in 2012 and this situation is divided four quarters in year.
If we look at the graph carefully, rural areas’ unemployment had the highest rate by %6.5 in first quarter while the people who lives in the rural area had the lowest unemployment rate by %2.
To continue with, in comparison to urban areas’ unemployment rate, which was up to %4, rural areas’ unemployment fallen to almost %4.5 in end of the 2nd quarter. İmmediately after, urban unemployment rate saw %2 as sharply decreased and rural unemployment rate was around %5.5 in 3rd quarter. In end of the 4th quarter, people who lives in cities and rural regions had almost same unemployment rate by %4.5 and around %4.8 respectively.
To sum up, generally, ın spide of the fact that unemployment rates has fluctuation sometimes along quarters, urban areas’ unemployment rate increases whereas rural areas’ unemployment rate decreases
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rural areas' unemployment fallen to almost %4.5 in end of the 2nd quarter. İ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, whereas, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29447852761 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10807500343 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.5539874106 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198409587891 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127301763748 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108115595618 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159290489931 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120114032927 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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