International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Do the problems of international travel outweigh its advantages?
It is irrefutable fact that international tourist business is backbone of numerous country’s economic in the world. It is illogical to say that it has less advantages because the fruitful outcomes of the same are more than it’s demerits. My inclination will analyse in further paragraph.
Discussing the merits of global tourism, the foremost one is that high revenue of any state. What I mean that, nations who are famous for tourist place, have chance to earn money from foreign people. It is extremely helpful to increase GDP of their nation. Furthermore, it also to helps to decline unemployment ratio from host country. Local people can get opportunities to do work as guide or translator. Because of non-native visitors, owner of restaurants and hotels earns a lots of money.
To add more benefits of it, culture understanding is best advantage of it. Explaining it, local citizens and visitors can understand culture of each other and follow them. They can learn good virtues from citizens of host state. Moreover, tourists are able to visit remote areas, roads, airports and hotels. Due to this reasons, government try to keep clean and attractive whole area. A final reason why I am in favour of tourism is that visitors become relax after this type of trip and can go back with new energy. It can be help to employee to do more productive work.
On the other hand, that there are few problem associated with international tourism. Firstly, there is the increasing crime rate. Visitors are not familiar with illegal activity of any unknow place as criminals try to do take advantage of it. Thief make target to stole their valuable things like camera, jewellery, wallet etc.. Another major problems is about health. Sometime visitors can not find healthy food and water which is extremely dangerous for their health. They might be suffering from skin disease if they are not aware of dirty beach water.
To conclude, international tourism has both advantages and disadvantages . However, the positive points outweigh the negative points.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun advantages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
..., owner of restaurants and hotels earns a lots of money. To add more benefits of it,...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: few problems
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
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Message: Two consecutive dots
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Suggestion:
...ve points outweigh the negative points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, i mean, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76404170704 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647928994083 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.782768207 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.16 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.52 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219855519197 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517180674695 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728370703742 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123427853672 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661667257435 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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