Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some
people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also
be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is
more important than others?
Today is the era of globalization. Modern technology has led the world to a great height. However, the economic parameters are not the only factors contributing towards a nation's growth but the overall participation of employability, tax structure and revenue generation accounts for the success ladder. Let us delve into these factors in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost point to be considered here is the amount of employment in a nation. Unless there are the accountable opportunities for job prospects, the progress towards achieving a reasonable Gross Domestic Product will always be lying down at the bottom end of the sea. Moreover, the hindrance of bridging the gap between networking and economic development would get wider.
The next aspect of worth consideration is the tax return service. people should be well aware of the fact that income and tax shares a direct relationship and are bound to be fulfilled for the success of their own country. The revenue streams of a high earning profile adds up to the major contribution to the developmental areas which in turn leads to a better way of making a promising world. Also, this helps in the maintenance of infrastructure, information technology and import export facility that fulfills the need of a successful nation.
In my opinion, every factor that gives way to a progressive country is worth considering. Despite the hindrances of a particular interest of any being, the main motive of every individual is to take steps towards building a great place to live in.
To conclude, government should encourage people to take the responsibility of growing in their respective fields and build a strong network with that of other countries so that the relations can become stronger and peace prevails.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16206896552 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07844525826 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6635502302 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151484313466 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432685306937 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500113158409 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075845599104 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344099352814 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.