Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages?
Household chores are being completed by electronic appliances as compared to earlier time, when people prefer to do work by hands. I think this a better option not just for working persons whereas for housewives also. The merits of this change outweigh its demerits, in order to save time and raise the turnover particular sector which will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
Using modern goods for doing home task are on their extreme level, because it do not waste time, rather these stuff finish the task with in few minutes and people can do multi task at the same time and increase their productivity. To illustrate with the usage of fully automatic washing machine women earn 35% more than earlier when they use semi automatic machine in which they shift the washing clothes from washing drum to drainer for spinning. Hence in technology world people need not do more physical effort which make them fatigue and decrease their work efficiency.
Moreover, this practice raise employment opportunity, because the high demand of goods more and more manufacturing and retailing units are being opened which earn profits and then contribute towards GDP. For instance in a survey report, it has showed that, in 2018 45% boom has been recorder in electronic market as compared to the year 2000, which means it helps the people to expand their business at large scale which will contribute at least 15% to the national income. Therefore, consumption of mechanical goods are not only better for individual but also for the country.
To conclude, usage of mechanical stuff makes the human life easy with that they can spend their time in another sector which is more important than home tasks. It become helpful to makes a man more potential towards their job and other profession.
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... working persons whereas for housewives also. The merits of this change outweigh its...
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Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
... are on their extreme level, because it do not waste time, rather these stuff fini...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...m washing drum to drainer for spinning. Hence in technology world people need not do ...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, as for, at least, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04026845638 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4684487119 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7286799719 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.545454545 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140618869948 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553265157051 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356770803727 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867881678861 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205279397249 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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