You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Ms Martin,
I am Harry Johnson, your new neighbor. we moved here last week due to my new job location. I am writing this letter to invite you to our housewarming party which is on next friday at 5pm and to apology in advance for any inconvenience or disturbance.
I am a journalist with CNN news channel. My family includes my husband and my two young children who study in greenwood school. The part will commence at 5 pm and end up by 9pm. We have planned to order food from outside so there will be no smoke due to cooking or grilling activity. This is a small party and the list of guests is limited to fifty only which includes our close friends and coleagues and our children's close friends. We might need some extra parking space available at your backyard, hope you do not mind. There will be music and dance performance by kids and adults, we will try to keep the volume as low as possible so as not to disturb you.
I request you to visit our house with your family and attend the party and it will be great time to introduce our kids with each other. For any suggestion or advice for the party you can contact me on 401-401-4011.
Yours sincerely
Harry Johnson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... I am Harry Johnson, your new neighbor. we moved here last week due to my new job ...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se with your family and attend the party and it will be great time to introduce o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37104072398 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44863700481 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633484162896 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4365868718 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3076923077 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 4.34317383033 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18368847618 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667569051284 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618699284533 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122884518124 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267493688495 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.