A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
– explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house
– tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
– say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear john,
I received your letter yesterday that mentions your plan to visit me this weekend. but unfortunately, I have my exams on saturday so I would not be home for that complete day. I will probably reach home around 6 pm, By that time you could do lunch and take rest. I am writing this letter to tell the arrangements that I made for that day.
First of all I am sorry that I could not even come it to receive you at train station as I have to leave around 8 am in the morning. The best way to reach my home is by bus and you can take 11 number bus to providence, my apartment is just five minutes walk away from providence bus stop. I would keep the keys under my patio rug so that you could find them easily,my apartment number is E-114 please do not forget that.
I will try my best to reach at the earliest but most probably I would come by 4 pm, by that time you could enjoy food and do some rest. In the evening we will go for dinner and I have booked a ticket for the movie End Game that we can enjoy together.
I am sorry again for the inconvenience but I hope you understand that the situation is really inevitable. hope to see you soon.
Warm Regards
Harry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ons your plan to visit me this weekend. but unfortunately, I have my exams on satur...
^^^
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'am'.
Suggestion: am
...ain station as I have to leave around 8 am in the morning. The best way to reach my home is by bu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
...me is by bus and you can take 11 number bus to providence, my apartment is just fiv...
^^^
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...o rug so that you could find them easily,my apartment number is E-114 please do not...
^^^
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...hat the situation is really inevitable. hope to see you soon. Warm Regards Harry...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14163090129 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30402959553 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6990137746 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4166666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281117771096 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100109724861 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434095949627 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167514153482 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670076052638 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.