A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
– explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house
– tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
– say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear uncle Jack,
It was a great pleasure to hear that you are finally coming to visit me. My mother told me that you will be coming by morning train on 15th Saturday. I just wanted to write this few words to you to let you know that due to some urgent work in my office I won't be able to come to the station to pick you up. But, don't worry. I've already made arrangements for you to get the keys and also one of my friends will be coming to pick you.
I believe you still remember Tom who was with me at the school. He was the guy with curly hair and a well-built body. We played rugby last time you visited us and he is still same and it won't be hard for you to recognize him. I will send his contact number and his car plate number in case you want to contact him.
Well, about the keys, I will be hiding the keys under the flower pot which is residing under the mango tree in front of the house. It won't be hard to find and please make sure to be comfortable at home. I will arrange to deliver lunch and evening snacks as well.
I will be reaching home around 4.00 pm and we both can go to nearby restaurant for dinner and hopefully Tom and a few of my other friends will join us. It would be great if you could bring your guitar. So we can sing and get some fun.
That's all for now. Looking forward to seeing you!
Take care,
Pathum
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ome to the station to pick you up. But, dont worry. Ive already made arrangements fo...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...tation to pick you up. But, dont worry. Ive already made arrangements for you to ge...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
.... So we can sing and get some fun. Thats all for now. Looking forward to seeing ...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... seeing you! Take care, Pathum
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, still, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.04779411765 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.89805249284 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.878586369 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7647058824 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382599616837 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11700787816 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856590052273 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193995349575 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791431453367 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.71 7.59969072165 75% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.