Your friend has been recently blessed with a baby. You have bought a gift.
-Explain about the gift you have bought
-What are the features of the gift
-Ask him to make an arrangement, so that you can present the gift.
Dear Alex,
Hope this letter finds you well. I am doing fine. Congratulations on the arrival of your baby. I am so much happy and overjoyed to hear the news. Glad to know that your wife and baby are good condition.
I have purchased a baby cot after receiving this and I am sure your baby would love to use to it. It is made out of jack wood and neatly polished so that no rough edges are there to hurt the baby and the parents as well. Additionally, the height of it is two feet. I intentionally bought this cot with an extra height since it will have no provision to allow the baby to fall down if he tries to get up.
Could you please let me know a weekend which I can visit you and see the lovely baby? Moreover, find a place where you can keep the cot in your room.
Looking forward to hearing for you soon.
Take care.
Joe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10303030303 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2170058151 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648484848485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8194057401 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4166666667 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185396388506 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579512092932 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474450423926 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114806810853 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365493446523 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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