It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30,as this is best both for the individual and for the society.Do you agree or disagree?
it is a truth universally acknowledged that a union of two souls is bound by the power vested in God. The fusion of a man and a woman is considered lawfully and culturally recognised. but the decision of this amalgamation shouldn’t be forced upon under the disguise of age factor. Hence, my opinion differs from the mentioned statement and I shall present my views in the following paragraphs.
Given the current high profile debate with regard to matrimonial affairs, it is quite surprising that people still condemn the idea of marrying at a late stage. also, many other factors such as financial dependence, platonic hindrance plays a crucial role in throwing a couple under the bus. Although this can prove fruitful to a certain type of inhabitants but a more elicit and urban environment would prefer their career opportunities and independent lifestyle over such boundations.
There is also, however, a further point to be considered. A lot people think that a women’s right age to get engaged comes as soon as she finishes her studies. Moreover, it is also believed that certain biological complications occurs if the process of wedding is delayed. To exemplify, hormonal changes sometimes becomes the cause of a failed relationship which prospers the idea of an early bond. Therefore, it is necessary to have a proper knowledge before reaching to any conclusion.
Nevertheless, such factors remain a growing problem. In my opinion, indigenous society should gather a profound sense of what actually wedding revolves around.
Noting the compelling nature of this topic, the ambiguity is high and open to interpretation. Undoubtedly, the fashion of a commitment and relationship is mutually exclusive. More or less, the main focus should be on the happiness of the individual all things considered rather than imposing any life- changing decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, such as, in my opinion, more or less, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25418060201 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10110102258 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66220735786 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5152290745 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4117647059 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10474175651 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256292941699 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248747476305 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490434676813 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213950240688 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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