Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
it is evident that over the last few decades, the vast majority of the population prefers to be self-employed, instead of being employed for companies and organizations. First of all, self-employed is someone for oneself or is the owner of a business. There are several reasons why more and more people choose to be self-employed, however, there are many drawbacks from their decision.
The cause of the rising levels of self-employment is the development of technology. A few decades ago, after the end of the school years, the only choice that someone had were the public or the private sector. Nowadays, young people with technology and their skills can work for themselves and eventually earn more money.
As the famous band, Abba said; Money makes the world go around, the main reason for this phenomenon is money. Why should someone choose to be an employee and earn the same salary every month, when he produces more individually and earn more in the end. The second most important reason is the ability to choose the working schedule. Most of the people prefer to sleep until the late morning hours and work during the evenings, but unfortunately, this is impossible for someone working in a company.
Every kind of action has a reaction, so anything that has advantages has disadvantages. Apparently, the unstable financially society that we live can not ensure anyone for the future. One day a company is on the top and suddenly, due to a financial crisis, it can be in the bottom. To be an employer is risky nowadays.
To conclude, the rapid and enormous development of technology and the internet have helped many people open their own businesses and expand them, however, the economic instability in which we live is the biggest reason preventing someone being self-employed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, second, so, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88689567991 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3897696848 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37965828352 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120600656109 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974855840992 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204532720716 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118260054055 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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