Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that
overnments and individuals can tackle these problems.
In recent ages, governments faced to several problems and have to solved them. one of the most important issuies was about village and city population and create a balance is the biggest duty of governments. In these days, a lot of people prefer to lives in urban area or they try to have second house in one village at least. In this essay, I would give some of relevant reasons and solutions about overpopulation in urban areas and point to some instances about this.
By and large, governments must pridicts to create several different kinds of jobs in urban areas. If the significant proportion of people decide to move to villages, jobless wildy rose in their areas. Developing industry is a good solution for governments because of unused lands and sufficient resources. On the other hand, cities become depeopled and a lot of services may be damaged and stop to give us their services. meanwile, make a mess. A good instance is drivers who left the jobs and transfering passengers doing uncompletely. The thirth problem for governments is provides requirments and necessory accessories and facilities for a large percent of people in villages. For example, creating gas stations, increasing the security level, constructing hospitals, building useful ways and roads, creating parks and other gaming areas will be costly and need to a complete plan and employing experts.
To conclusion, immigrating people from cities to urban areas have several problems for governments, like they must create a lot of jobs, and create facilities and accessories for the significant number of people, and cities become depeopled and a lot of services quits from servicing cycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...veral problems and have to solved them. one of the most important issuies was about...
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Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ge, governments must pridicts to create several different kinds of jobs in urban areas. If the si...
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Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwile
...ged and stop to give us their services. meanwile, make a mess. A good instance is driver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, at least, for example, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12454212454 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86235084657 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3432915819 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902237379865 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295565240926 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419107810035 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066109964678 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051253385683 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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