Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true that nobody escapes the power of advertising these days, whether this is commercial or online marketing. In my opinion, although this trend has some positive aspects, an advertisement can affect negatively on people's life.
On the one hand, we are unable to deny the advantages of advertising. For example, someone may be planning for a holiday trip; however, there are many destinations that they cannot make a decision. Therefore, informative advertising can be useful for customers to choose the right choice and meet their requirements. Moreover, I am going to go to Sapa; and I have found some brochures which are suitable for my request. Thus, some PR is impacted by our lives positively.
On the other hand, it is no far-fetched to imagine how the advertisements would affect on part of human life gloomily. Firstly, people are unable to trust one-hundred percent in the content that producers issued public to a social. For instance, there is more and more anti-obesity medication selling on Facebook. The buyers always write content such as you can lose your weight in ten days, or it does not damage our health. Nonetheless, this announcement is untrue, but people still believe and consume that unhealthy medicine. Secondly, because the images and the sounds of advertisements surrounded around us on a daily basis, it disturbs our privacy. For example, I have always received the phone call from telesales marketing to ask me to buy insurance or take part in the competition and have a gift, etc, while I was reading or sleeping. Last but not least, some companies invited celebrities to advertise the products and persuade dwellers to buy things that they do not need and cannot afford, especially children or teenagers. they are one of the most objects that a marketing team wants to address directly.
In conclusion, I believe that advertisement has its pros and cons that I mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05956112853 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9334290254 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0910826713 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9411764706 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7058823529 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228752951398 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614127309103 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588026624292 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125552986517 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599607298498 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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