Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
· advise them of your situation
· explain how this is affecting you
· request a new card
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my wallet couple of days back, which had my student id in it and I would like to request a replacement for it.
this was lost somewhere in cafeteria for which I looked around and asked some people but had no luck. therefore, I made a formal police complaint on same day as the wallet also contained my driver license and credit cards. Due to this, I do not have my student id with me, and I am unable to use the university facilities. As a result, my studies are being compromised. I went to administration department to order my replacement, but they refused to accept my application as I did not have any proof of identity with me.
I would therefore like to receive a replacement for my student id card immediately in order to utilize university facilities effectively.
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours sincerely.
Kind Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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...ike to request a replacement for it. this was lost somewhere in cafeteria for whi...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...and asked some people but had no luck. therefore, I made a formal police complaint on sa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have any proof of identity with me. I would therefore like to receive a repl...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e university facilities effectively. I look forward to hearing back from you. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g back from you. Yours sincerely. Kind Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74545454545 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87431231046 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4919814027 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128030895284 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536723117639 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642271173661 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775158894489 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569576522821 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.