Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Nature is the most beautiful creation made by god.The prompt recommends us to keep whatever remaining wildlife by imposing serious laws, even if the wilderness could be used for economic interest . I mostly agree with the prompt about preserving Mother nature by any means necessary, as the particulates present in the wildlife cannot speak for themselves and I support them by giving two reasons.
Forest life protects us from some arcane phenomenons, which money couldn't possibly do.To elaborate the reason, we human beings often led a luxurious life using modern equipment like air conditioners,some other electric appliances, which releases dangerous carbon gases like the monoxide,mixtures of methane which are highly hazardous. So,to neutralize these deadly gases an excess amount of oxygen is needed.Trees release oxygen and intake carbon dioxide(co 2),hence they are indispensable because the carbon and oxygen chemically reacts with each other and dissolves methane and other dangerous oxides.Even during industrial ages the gases released were similar mainly due to the abundant industries but,the effect of the particles is more in contemporary world because of sparse wildlife and the use of wilderness for constructing novice buildings thinking that could boost economy which might be a pure assumption,who knows?
Given,the ongoing horrors about animal body exploitation government must foist conventions more forcibly.To illustrate the above reason consider the recent actions made by trophy hunters, Who hunt naïve animals and kill them in a gruesome way. Basically, hunters kill animals for self-satisfaction and for trade purposes, A rhino horn values at half a million dollars and the flesh of a lion could cost more than two million dollars. At least,for saving innocent creatures
government must let go of any economic interests and must seemingly improve wild life.
on the contrary,one may assert that instead of spending huge money on wilderness the same money can be used for developing educational institutions, public hospitals, irrigation facilities of the nation.To illustrate, consider "India" as per the recently conducted survey almost fifty percent of population live in poverty.India, hence diverted its plans to diminish poverty by turning all it's resources towards well-being of the citizen,In time this idea gave optimum results as they planned contingently.Instead, if they cared about waning of nature life who knows they could further go down in a mire?
To conclude, economy can only be boosted if there is a diurnal human life which in turn correlates to preserving forest life(explained in first reason).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, well, at least, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62034739454 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13059517729 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650124069479 0.4932671777 132% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.917888956 60.3974514979 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.666666667 118.986275619 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.7777777778 23.4991977007 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177735244642 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746560984568 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547125873237 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864431189948 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537212296577 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 14.1392134831 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 48.8420337079 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.38706741573 132% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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