Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of money than peoples in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while other think its unfair.Discuss both the views and your own opinion.
The accomplished sports participants can earn a considerable amount of money as compare to other major professions.Some people opine that this is entirely deserve while other consider its unjust.Firstly, we will discuss the struggle and efforts these made to make this place.secondly, we will discuss the it create restlessness and disappointment between other highly qualified persons.
On the one side of argument who consider that sports persons earning is their reward of hard work and dedication toward their goals. there are many sacrifices these people made to get this position because most of the time they leave their family and friends for cumbersome practice and training. While they have no private life or privacy on account of their fame, such as, many sports celebrities when every at holidays or on vocations disturbed by fans. And the level of stress these players go through while performance could be another reason of their earning.
on the other side it is considered as prejudice for noble professionals like scientist, doctors and lawyers because their earning is lower as compare to highly paid celebrities. Although this situation is also creating distress in younger generation about education and most of youth wish to make great in night. And many of the young generation became more interested in sports person history than about important discoveries.for example, in each sport event space full with their fans and audience but in educational competition its minimal.
In conclusion, players earning could be justified by their performance and abilities.In my opinion they deserve high pays and incentives for their hard work and performance. But other important profession should be given equal importance like other field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39636363636 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96305850473 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5009937827 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.4 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246982888237 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870059387642 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746557431505 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153265969749 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784948760618 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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