Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think that the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages.
At present, most of the nations want to raise their standard of living through economic growth as it has many benefits. On the other hand, some people believe that, it has negative effect as it causes lose of social values. This essay sheds light on both merits and demerits of economic development and expresses my opinion as well.
There are many advantages of economic growth to the citizens of the country. One of them is, as the economy grows, more employment opportunity rises which helps people to earn sufficient amount of money in order to meet their basic needs like food, clothing and shelter as a result, drop in poverty line can be seen. Another is improved healthcare and education facilities. People can get good education which helps them to get jobs in well reputed companies and on other hand, improved medical treatments, increase the life expectancy. Hence, individuals can live longer life and can fulfil their all dreams and desires.
In addition to that, there are some disadvantages as well. In order to earn more money, people do hard work and they do not get time for their families so, they become materialistic and selfish because they believe that anything can be bought by money even love, affection, care and relationships which is not true. This lead to lose of social and moral values.
To conclude, although social development to raise standard of living has pros but cons are also there. In my opinion, I think that these demerits can be curbed by giving better moral and social eduction to children at their early ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88345864662 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49966078314 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2997938806 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224602718529 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825675296844 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572118097531 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135898631168 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506482198607 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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