In many countries, people in big cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, it has become popularly in many countries that people who reside in huge cities tend to live alone or in small household units than in large families which have some generations. I completely agree that this is a positive trend.
The first point I would mention is that living alone or in a small family could occur fewer conflicts than in a large family. This means that there is a gap of living conceptions among people and generations and if living in a small family, people are able to restrict these inconsistencies, which are quite popular in a big family. A typical example is that the divergence between how to raise children of modern parents and traditional grandparents. So, I argue that members in small families would easier to understand and then, feel happier.
The second point I would mention is that it gives the freedom, a pleasant feeling and an independent ability for people who live alone or in small families. Firstly, they would bring the opportunity to live in their own way, such as eating what they prefer, watching T.V programs they favor, and so on. Secondly, they are lived in a more expanse space because they have not to share the space with many others. And finally, instead of relying on relatives, they would learn the independent living way which is very necessary for these days.
In conclusion, with these arguments, I believe that many people in modern cities who are looking for a life with freedom, pleasure, and independence as well through selecting live alone or in small families than in large cities is a good trend.
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- In many countries, people in big cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend? 61
- In many countries, people in big cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80514705882 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62854791952 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.336009126 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315461147658 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124033037554 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877264800875 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224309512673 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866698139355 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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