Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
A Government is a body of people elected by the people, for the people. I consider the government to be the people’s servant as their main goal is to look out for the people of the country that they govern. I would have to disagree with the recommendation for a few reasons.
If the government officials relied solely on their own judgement, it would result in another form of dictatorship. For example, Germany was governed by the Nazi party who ruled Germany by solely relying on their own judgement. This resulted to the infamous world wars. More power leads to increase in ego and pride which ultimately results in destruction.
If the government officials are given complete power over the country, there is no guarantee that they would build the nation they are governing. A perfect example of this would be North Korea under the rule of Kim Jong Un. Articles after articles suggest that North Korea is on a downward spiral.
In conclusion, a government is elected to look after the bigger picture of the nation that they govern but they should also work on improving the well being of the people by listening to the concerns of the citizens of that nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 2235.4752809 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77450980392 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68027453591 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 704.065955056 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7671710643 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210317721125 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822068383534 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512413567583 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119119426884 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439689065978 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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