Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However , others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Agree or disagree?
Happiness plays a vital role in everyone's life. Some people believe that money is the major reason in achieving happiness, some others tend to oppose this view and say that money has nothing to do with happiness. I strongly believe that money has no relation with happiness and both are different concept altogether.
On the one side of the argument, people believe that money is the most important aspect for being happy. Certainly, money is essential to buy everything in this world. Right from basic meals to lavish homes, one have to pay a certain amount. Without money it would be hard to have comfortable life in this world and it is not difficult to perceive that why people believe that money is necessary to meet happiness.
On the other side of the argument, people believe that money has no connection with happiness and both are two different aspects of life. Although, a survival amount of money is required to fulfill basic requirements, the level of happiness does not increase with the level of money and nobody can argue that the richest man is the happiest person in this world. There are more significant aspects of life which have more profound impact on everyone's life and plays a major role to attain happiness like contentment of helping others, having interesting job. To illustrate, the wealthy people donate their money to help unprivileged people and people often leave their highly paid job to follow their passion. If money was the source of their happiness, they would have not done that. Hence, feeling content is indispensable rather than having enormous amount of money and it is not hard to see that money has no relation with happiness.
In conclusion, Money is required to get materialistic things which leads us to comfortable life. However it cannot assure happiness. Therefore it is not hard to believe that money has no relation with happiness. Feeling content is more essential to have sustainable happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97256097561 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62820970307 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466463414634 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8944887438 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453989454842 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159671986685 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125831722132 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316398223581 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101247123915 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.