You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment.
I your letter:
- give details of the things that were unsatisfactory
- explain the reactions of the members of your family
- ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am rocky stone, we had just safety came back home yesterday, today I would like to write this letter to let you know the bad conditions which have made us very uncomfortable when we stay in your apartment.
Firstly, I would complained about the air-condition in the children room, it was not too noises but also not reach the degree as we expected, all my kids could not well sleepped and they were suffered with these situation.
Secondly, there was not TV remote-control in adult room and the rest were out battery, as you know the convenience store was very far from there, it was took a lot of time to get the store, I was extremely unsatisfactory with this case.
So, I would like to ask you would be carefull double-check all the facilities, make sure they are well running and in good condition before handover to the guest, avoiding for someone have met the unhappy in their vacation like us.
Thanks for your time and hope that would bring some good advises to your business.
Sincerely your,
rocky stone
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'complain'
Suggestion: complain
... in your apartment. Firstly, I would complained about the air-condition in the children...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...ll sleepped and they were suffered with these situation. Secondly, there was not TV remote-c...
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Line 6, column 154, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...e store was very far from there, it was took a lot of time to get the store, I was e...
^^^^
Line 8, column 185, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...over to the guest, avoiding for someone have met the unhappy in their vacation like ...
^^^^
Line 14, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iness. Sincerely your, rocky stone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69189189189 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58870954199 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681081081081 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2701427083 44.8134815571 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 4.34317383033 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206165557349 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960605667179 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653905793328 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836237340418 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781345824957 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 8.37731958763 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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