Whether the design of the building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work? Discuss factors
The place where one has to work is where he/she spends most of the productive time in the day and this pays a lot of impact in both and positive and negative sense on the mindset of people depending on the ambience of the place. If the building is providing all the facilities that are needed by a person it will double the productivity and vice-versa. The following essay will shed a light on the factors of these.
Firstly, if a workspace is fulfilling all the basic needs of comfort like temperature control, comfortable sitting place, good lighting then it avoids any kind of distraction from the work inturn boosting up the mood, which will further increase the productvity. In this case, people give best of their abilities to achieve more leading to the happy state of mind. For Instance, if one is getting a good sitting space with all the requirements fulfilled, then he/she will be relaxed and can entirely focus on work. This will help him/her to fulfill the tasks with concentration which will impact the result at the end.
On the contratary, if the place is dull in ambience by not providing any comfortable facilities it brings down the motivation level of the employees because most of the time one is struggling to find a right space to work. This further impacts the results, which are directly related to the mindset of the person in his/her life. For example, If in an office space one is not getting a right environment to work then results will be impacted negatively because one is not abe to give his/her 100% in the work which can further lead to development of depression and anxiety.
To summarize, the design of the building plays an important role in shaping the behaviour of the person at the work space developing relaxed state of mind or anxiety depending on the ambience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not abe to give his/her 100% in the work which can further lead to development of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73501577287 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65257107504 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492113564669 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7812553371 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230358914116 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866935943435 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03596667223 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139517115342 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436439593923 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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