People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In psychology, there are two generic approaches to explain the patterns verified in human behavior. One theory maintains that the surrounding environment plays a crucial role in the individual's character, while the other points to out an inward cause. Scientific evidence can offer solid proof to support both views, however, I agree with the first because of my experience.
Parents have a deep influence over their children, which arises not only through genetics, but also their attitude towards the many aspects of life. Despite being prodigious in any field, a boy or a girl still depends on an auspicious environment to grow their skill-set. For example, in Brazil, a great number of elementary school students with high IQ levels cannot manage to make their way to university due to the poor conditions imposed by such a developing nation.
Oh the other hand, as thinking creatures, we are able to make judgements. As Jean Paul Sartre says, "Man is condemned to be free because he is the sole responsable for his decisions". Therefore,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...environment plays a crucial role in the individuals character, while the other points to ou...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able for his decisions'. Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 2235.4752809 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 442.535393258 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16860465116 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93624222235 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.767441860465 0.4932671777 156% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 704.065955056 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0713558335 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.125 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.21951772744 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119351605673 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406965143627 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281978820201 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651016738584 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300702126335 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.