In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
The aging population is a tendency in the developed countries. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, individuals and societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
There are several problems anticipated in the country where life expectancy is on the rise. The main issue is the declined labor force. Specifically, the proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller causes the lack of human resource for the vảious kinds of job which require strength and agility. An aging population means a greater tax burden for working adults as more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension while the governments will receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. Further pressures will include in the demand for healthcare, more convenient public infrastructure, and more time young adults need to spend on taking care of their elderly relatives.
However, there are several solutions that the government and individuals can take to alleviate the problems described above. Firstly, the government should implement some measures to increase the younger population such as encourage couples to have more children or open for immigrants. Taking Russia as an example, its government has given the families with more than 3 children a certain amount of money to express the encouragement. Another example is Canada, Australia, and Norway, they provide a welcome immigration policy to attract young immigrants. The second measure should be taken by each individual that they should be aware of their own health condition so that even when they become the senior citizen, they are still in a good health and continue a productive working life with less necessity of healthcare and transport facilities. Additionally, young couples should be aware of the situation and response to the expectation of the country in having more babies.
In conclusion, various methods can be taken by both government and individual to solve the life expectancy challenges that are certain to arise as the population of countries grow older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33928571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90537171585 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6610577892 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245304047655 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784871068284 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512396693164 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155740700617 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341167230083 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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