To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In order to acquaint oneself to a society, we need to visit and scrutinize its major cities because they provide valuable information about the culture and history behind the society, as well as the current trends of the society. However, I think it is not sufficient to only look at the major cities because small towns may also tell us important things about a society.
Admittedly, big cities are those places which have witnessed important events in the history of a society or function as critical financial and political centers. When people want to look into a society, they can visit its major cities, especially the historical sites or famous architectures. For example, if a visitor wants to understand the American society, he can go to Washington D.C. and take a tour around buildings like the Capitol Hill and the Lincoln Memorial. Having been to these places, he could understand the core values that the Americans in the past and at present believe in. Also, the modern skyscrapers and business centers can depict the development of the American society. However, one cannot see sites like these in small cities or towns in the US because they are relatively secluded compared the internationalized big cities.
Nevertheless, it is not sufficient to study the major cities. Sometimes small towns have rather significant places to see. What's more, one can talk the people in these small towns so that the people in this society can provide personal perspectives and helpful information to help an outsider understand the society. Yet in major cities the outsider will find it difficult to communicate with others because everything is fast-paced there.
Furthermore, the people in major cities may not truly reflect the image of a society. All the big cities are attracting new college graduates and labor from all over the world. These young people bring different cultures and values with them into a particular society, contributing something new to the culture of that society. As a result, if one only talks to people from the major cities, he can only see part of a society. Instead of restricting to major cities, he should visit other types of cities and even small neighborhood, and the people living in those areas may have lived there for many generations, thus reserving the traditions and values of the society.
Lastly, with the internationalization and modernization of the world, the major cities of many different societies are becoming similar as they all have, for example, central business districts, shopping centers and parks. Therefore, it is impossible to distinguish one city from another. If a person only studies the major cities, he may not be able to grasp the true image of a society.
In conclusion, it is essential for people to study the major cities of a society because they can gain knowledge about the present and the past of a society. Nonetheless, they need to delve into other cities as well, which allows them to gain a full understanding of a society from different perspectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2550.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0495049505 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86079612952 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445544554455 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1605317686 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.909090909 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9545454545 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161518523338 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580204981686 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311086267609 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992077159416 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102455441623 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.