Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals? (2)
The rapid growth of culture conflicts among western countries has been seen recently. This essay will propose some solutions that can be implemented by the government and individuals.
It is common to see misunderstandings happened among people from different countries. A simple thing may have different values due to their background. Such as Indians use their hands to grab food while others from different countries may see it is not healthy behavior, therefore, conflict occurs. As individuals, we can try to put yourself on other people's shoes, and respect our differences. Additionally, we can look up more Internet about their cultures and learn other people's thinking to view the world.
Governments also need to take their responsibilities for the xenophobia. People may see migrators as an enemy because the limit-resource could be shared, and job opportunities may be taken by foreigners as well. What the government can do is educate their civics and impose legislation. People from different places seeing things different which propose more creative things. Migrators also can contribute to the labor market for the aging population country. Governments can educate through media. Singapore as an example, more than fifty percent of demography is from other countries. They welcome foreigners to work for them and impose a rule to punish racism.
In conclusion, governments can impose rules and through media to educate people while individuals can respect others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48260869565 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0460889424 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621739130435 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2885877093 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8125 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22807057795 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760887615244 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687640710003 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15868869418 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077452365345 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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