Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and society as a whole. What are some advantages and disadvantages of economic development?
It is often said that economic growth and development is nothing else but benefits for people and society as a whole because they improve life quality of people and employment market. When the advantages are obvious, one should take into account possible disadvantages, which such growth implies.
On the one hand, economic growth requires more volumes of resources, therefore the significant number of new working places appears on the market, which reduces the unemployment rate in the country. With the growth of industries and technologies, there are different positions available for people with different qualifications, as for those who do not have any qualifications, to employees with high qualifications. As a result, the wealth of people is increasing and the wealth of the country accordingly.
Moreover, economic development improves the well-being of people, providing more reliable medical appliances and social benefits. By facilitating such services, a country will contribute in the health and happiness of its citizens in the long run and increase their loyalty. Furthermore, economic development is closely connected with education; more positions require more specialists, labour market dictates employment requirements. People will become more professional and highly qualified.
But, on the other hand, economic development with its rapid industry growth will deteriorate the environmental situation. Heavy industries and factories are generating huge amounts of waste and air pollution, which in some cases may be irreversible. For example, in China, where economic growth is pacing at a huge speed, due to intense factory load, the ecology of some regions is in dramatic condition.
In conclusion, whereas advantages of economic growth, such as improved quality of life and decreased levels of unemployment are unquestionable, the disadvantages such as air and water pollution must be taken into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore professional and highly qualified. But, on the other hand, economic develop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21556274235 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6325177958 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290247381133 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946340893416 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071901573179 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159992114563 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508613565006 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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