You recently received an invitation to a three-day training program which should benefit you and the company. Write a letter to your manager and say
– Ask to attend the program.
– Describe the program.
– Explain how the program will benefit the company
Dear John,
The reason I am writing to you is a training invitation that I have received recently. I would really appreciate, if you could let me participate in this training, because it would definitely advantage our company.
The training is called "How to secure your corporate data" and will be held in Moscow in August. It should take no more than three days. The main agenda of the training is clear from the title, however, there will be others interesting topics such as: "How to operate private data" and "What to do, if leak has happened".
I believe, that participating in this exclusive training will benefit our company, considering the last case with Brandon. Moreover, having some basic knowledge about corporate data, I would not mind to improve my knowledge in this field and later apply my new skills in our company.
Thank you for you time and consideration.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Your sincerely,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 196, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind improving'.
Suggestion: mind improving
...ledge about corporate data, I would not mind to improve my knowledge in this field and later ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89055125864 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685534591195 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5624995324 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180382352434 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816568761717 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427263941105 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976179114155 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299345221486 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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