Some say that people working in different job roles should get different amount of holiday time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Some people opine that employees with different job roles should have a different amount of holidays due to different types of job they perform. I cannot agree with this statement, because I think that every worker should have equal rights with everyone else no matter the job role.
Firstly, it may seem that some low positioned job roles require less effort than a higher ones, which is totally wrong impression, because every job no matter the role, may be very hard as well as extremely easy. For example, the role of an operator of a drilling machine on the construction site will be more exhausting and hard than a manager who sells apartments, even though the hours of work of a manager may be more. So, it is better for these people to have equal amounts of holiday time due to complications to estimate efforts.
Secondly, there are cases possible, when one person may never be on a role that has more holiday time, hence he or she will feel discriminated, which can lead to the increased level of stress and decreased loyalty. For example, a factory worker with a forgery education will never get the role of a CEO due to lack of knowledge and experience and vice versa. Hence, providing more holiday time for one of them will deprive the other one from such a chance and may result in jealousy and insult.
In conclusion, even though some roles may seem not equal, it is very hard to estimate the adequate effort applied on the job, moreover some workers may do not have an opportunity to get a role with more holiday time, so they will feel discriminated. Hence, by making the amount of holiday time equal for each employee will make sure that everybody has equal conditions and rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65562913907 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48401759374 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533112582781 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7329855923 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.6 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235066303607 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105761960637 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872110346928 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158272012375 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716945882233 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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