Experience is more effected way to teach as compare to books.
Parents are responsible for the upbringing of child. Children in their early age learn many lessons of life from parents. Therefore, I agree that parents should be legally responsible for children's behaviour. This essay will discuss about possible reasons for this with example.
Firstly, children spend most time with their parents. Therefore they always learn many facts like language and behaviour from parents. Hence, if parents failed to fulfill this duty then they should be held legally for children's act. For instance, in American legal system, many parents punished for child's behaviour. Therefore, parents have legal responsibility of upbringing child and they cannot avoid that.
Secondly, children are very close to parents and parents closely monitors child's growth. So, parents are pretty much aware of positive and negative side of child. Thus, if they fails to point out such mistakes of child then indirectly they are also responsible for child's act. For instance, many terrorists come from such families that in which parents do not have any control on child. Therefore, parents are equally responsible for child's crime.
In conclusion, as parents play critical and vital role in child's upbringing, they clearly know child's behaviour and traits. Therefore they are also responsible for children's act and should be held legally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ren spend most time with their parents. Therefore they always learn many facts like langu...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
...d negative side of child. Thus, if they fails to point out such mistakes of child the...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...early know childs behaviour and traits. Therefore they are also responsible for childrens...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44285714286 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5356460979 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0170825484 50.4703680194 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4375 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.38 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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