Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plant and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years there has been a considerable rise in the number of problems related to our environment. Although, few individuals think that nowadays the major environmental issue is the extinction of specific flora and fauna species , others believe that there are more significant problems. In my opinion, I think that the other problems such as global warming are more vital.
On the one hand, it is thought by few that the biggest environment related problem in recent times is the loss of particular animals and plants species because they sometime plays an important role in the ecosystem. In other words, such species can be the source of survival for others. For example, a recent research done by the students of Oxford University stated that in 2015, in the Amazon forest, the loss of a particular plant specie lead to the extinction of 30 animal species because it was their source of food. Thus, it is considered as a major environmental problem.
On the other hand, many people think that there are other environmental issues like global warming which are more important and I agree. As in our time due to this problem there are severe and unpredicted floods, rainfalls and thunderstorms which are potentially affecting farmers and other people. For instance, a recent Journal produced by Times Magazine stated that in Pakistan, approximately 2000 farmers lost 20 million dollars of crop due to heavy flood in the summer of 2018 which was mainly due to global warming.
In conclusion, while people think the biggest environmental issue is the loss of specific flora and fauna species, however, I consider that the other issues like global warming are more significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06093189964 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77360003296 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505376344086 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8459830533 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.363636364 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 4.34317383033 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307624910332 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124066559308 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434497555992 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183948608057 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395962438866 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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