Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with?
Nowadays most universities control their students by their professors during class attendance. Some think that students’ life is not necessary to do it, whereas, other people say that university team should not compulsory some classes activities for students. I display my opinion with some details.
On the one hand, universities classes may be compulsory. For this reason, university students who are 18 or 20 years old, they can do variety activities by their own. During classes, they may decide any ideas or imagines for them importance. And then, if they want to go to their lessons, they have any lessons. Behind this reason, if they can learn knowledge which is necessary for their life or future job.
On the other hand, if students’ classes may be compulsory, they cannot attend their necessity lessons. Because, education system organize very well by several professors. Also, higher education system play role importance for every student’s life. That’s why, university’s classes attending is optional. For instance, in our country, classes attending are very important and control by university team. As a result, I learnt several knowledge for my social life, job and interpersonal skills, too, when I studied at university. This knowledge helps to me at my job and relations with my colleagues.
To put it a nutshell, I pen down saying that some people believe that students’ education is compulsory to do attendance classes, while others claim that students attend their classes. Personally, I suggest that students should do attendance their lessons on time.
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Suggestion: who is a are
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... cannot attend their necessity lessons. Because, education system organize very well by...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some knowledge'.
Suggestion: some knowledge
... university team. As a result, I learnt several knowledge for my social life, job and interperson...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, well, whereas, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41832669323 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07768859836 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.715562674 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329255908737 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105009520085 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820720345565 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215688431493 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073605410918 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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