Private car is one of the most convenient transportation where people can easily move from place to another in their own way.However it created some grave problems including noise and air pollution, traffic congestion and many more. There are many possible steps we can take to reduce personal vehicle and this essay will state the major action in order to decline private motor vehicle,
Firstly, improving the public transportation that would encourage people to use public vehicle instead of private.As we know that people prefer comfortable sit so they seek to private motor however it is far expensive to afford.If there is some changes in public automobile by creating facilities to people then they will avoid private one.As a result there will be no cars on road as well as congestion problem may also be reduced if this action is taken. Secondly, Increasing the price of fuel also helps to decline the private car because people hesitate to pay huge amount on fuel and it will discourage them to drive their own car.Hence, people choose buses or train considering it as a cheapest transportation incompare to cars and the number of private motor will be decline.
In additional,government should make strict rules for private vehicles for private vehicles user.For example people who want to buy private vehicle they should have huge amount of money on their bank account and not allowed to have more than one vehicles in each family. Consequently this regulation reduce the purchase of cars,
To sum up, if above action implement then the number of using private vehicle will be removed as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
... from place to another in their own way.However it created some grave problems includin...
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Suggestion: However,
... from place to another in their own way.However it created some grave problems includin...
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Suggestion: As
...o use public vehicle instead of private.As we know that people prefer comfortable ...
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Suggestion: If
...r however it is far expensive to afford.If there is some changes in public automob...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r however it is far expensive to afford.If there is some changes in public automob...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some changes'?
Suggestion: there are some changes
...owever it is far expensive to afford.If there is some changes in public automobile by creating facili...
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Suggestion:
...ting facilities to people then they will avoid private one.As a result there will...
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Suggestion: As
...eople then they will avoid private one.As a result there will be no cars on road ...
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Suggestion: Hence
... discourage them to drive their own car.Hence, people choose buses or train consideri...
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Suggestion: the
...choose buses or train considering it as a cheapest transportation incompare to ca...
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Suggestion: , government
... motor will be decline. In additional,government should make strict rules for private ve...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vehicles'' or 'vehicle's'?
Suggestion: vehicles'; vehicle's
... rules for private vehicles for private vehicles user.For example people who want to buy...
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Suggestion: For
...vate vehicles for private vehicles user.For example people who want to buy private ...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one vehicle', 'a vehicle', or simply 'vehicles'?
Suggestion: one vehicle; a vehicle; vehicles
...count and not allowed to have more than one vehicles in each family. Consequently this regul...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
... more than one vehicles in each family. Consequently this regulation reduce the purchase of ...
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...e the purchase of cars, To sum up, if above action implement then the number o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04832713755 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7652895561 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.600260416 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.6 106.682146367 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8 20.7667163134 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27760268242 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151387781148 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497683925911 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179700383017 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00843496567549 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 13.0946893788 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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