Some people like to buy books to read, others like to borrow books from libraries or from other people. Compare the advantages of these two ways of reading. Which do you prefer? Why?
A book is kind of material and product which written by its writer and editor who has a book company. There are so many different types of book such as a science book, a mathematic book, a novel book, etc. Some of them are expensive and some other cheap, and people who want to one of these books find them in the library, in the bookstore or on internet.
First of all there are two main types of reaching books. The first method is buying from some places such as bookstores, markets or people who sells their books. Second technique is borrowing from libraries, friends, classmates or colleagues who known by people who want books. Both two approaches have their advantages and disadvantages.
Lets think the first approach which named borrowing books. In that method, people would like to reach their book from people around them or places where books could be found in there. This method is more relational than the second approach because people always interact with each other. And, people talk their experiences about books which read by them to volunteer of these books. And, these interactions impact people's opinions for choosing books. Also, there are some ways for meeting with new people. And that method is one of these methods. Although, there are many effective ways for reaching love some people want to select that way, because they think that reading books influence other people positively.
Lets consider the second technique, buying book, that technique causes more outcome. And, people consume their budget for buying new books. Almost all people have only one version of these books. In contrast, in the first method people would take other versions of these book from libraries. A one advantage is people may use their book only themselves. A second advantage is that approach is that helping writers and editors of books. Because, these book companies first aim is selling books and improving their incomes.
In conclusion, taking account of all above advantages, the first method is more effective than the second method. Altough, I can buy any books i definitely prefer the second method which borrowing book from libraries and friend around me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00824175824 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37114969233 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467032967033 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9334975205 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9583333333 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396769297934 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118990109044 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736468267422 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230248358793 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600188901041 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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