When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree
The construction industry is one of the most developing categories in the country’s total economics in this modern society. Consequently, designing an erection is becoming a much more significant stage that needs to be taking out to consider carefully. While some people dispute that the purpose of the edifice is the primary factor, I firmly concede that there are lots of other elements that created a great building not just its intended use.
Thoughtfully considering the deliberate use of the structure is a very important factor that contributes to creating great architecture. Having a vivid imagining of the building’s function can help the architect makes the most suitable design that fits the edifice’s intended use. For instance, constructing a building as an apartment block requires the designer making as many rooms and spaces as possible to solve the high urban dweller’s population. Moreover, the edifice needs to be designed using friendly constructing elements that are suitable for the apartment owners. Furthermore, installing the appropriate building’s system also requires a true understanding of the house intended use. Like the lighting systems in an office is different from that in an apartment.
Despite the undeniable benefit of understanding the erection’s purpose, there are so many other factors that contribute to making a perfect architecture and the aesthetic quality is the one that can’t be ignored. For example, if an apartment has the construction fitting perfectly with its purpose but lacking beauty, it will hardly attract any customer purchasing the apartment. Due to the development of average life conditions, people currently love the idea of having a convenient house with a stunning outward look. Moreover, the co-operation of the building with these other outside elements such as the fountain, trees, and fences also has a remarkable impact on the final quality of the edifice.
To conclude, while some people argue that the most important factor when designing a building is its purpose, I strongly concede that the success of the building’s design also depends on other elements like the outlook. I would highly recommend that the architecture should consider all the inside and outside factors that impact the building’s design.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54901960784 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21899808963 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4525103934 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.066666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211121183506 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750561236555 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618978567954 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144636424849 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647956145868 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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