In recent years, extreme sports have become increasingly popular, and some people argue that governments should prohibit them. I completely disagree with the idea that these sports are too dangerous, and I therefore believe that they should not be banned.
It is often argued that such extreme sports as sky diving and skiing can jeopardize people in some aspects so governments should put a ban on these. In my opinion, however, I strongly believe that such sports are not as dangerous as many people think and they do not need to be banned.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why skiing or sky diving is not as dangerous as many people may think. In fact, all sports have elements of risks but they also have safety regulations and procedures which guarantee sportsperson’s health and life to a certain extent. Moreover, almost every sports player who wants to pursuit these kinds of sports have to undergo appropriate training practices so the dangers can be minimized. For example, if a person is going to take up skiing, he should engage in clubs for skiing or classes involved for beginners so that he would be well-equipped with both knowledge and practices. Finally, the safe quality of facilities used for so-called sports have been significantly enhanced.
On the other hand, I strongly think that it will be impossible to forbid such kinds of sports. In the first place, people should be free to enjoy their leisure time by any sports they would like. If authorities applied prohibition policy, it would be considered as a violation of human rights. Furthermore, there are still far more dangerous sports being practiced and there are also professional competitions for them.
In conclusion, although many people argue that such extreme sports as sky diving and skiing exert pernicious impacts upon sports people, I personally reckon that governments should not prohibit these by virtue of safety policies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ften argued that such extreme sports as sky diving and skiing can jeopardize people in som...
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Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
... are a variety of reasons why skiing or sky diving is not as dangerous as many people may ...
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Line 2, column 311, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... certain extent. Moreover, almost every sports player who wants to pursuit these kinds...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...eople argue that such extreme sports as sky diving and skiing exert pernicious impacts upo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01067615658 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80487104503 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6060853403 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341053501376 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124799593256 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770500632262 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231820001491 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524778864213 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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