Televison adverisement play an important role on business, company product and other activities which helps to obtain the attention of people.Todai, it become one of the eminet tredn that most of the people take it as a best way of marketing and make known to the public about their items and missions.While television commercial has many benfits and also some drawback.
There are various advantages of displaying advertisement on T.V screen. The main One is thaT,beacause of the commercial broadcasting on screen many people do not have to search for product in market which makes them more easier to recive their product by watching the advertise on T.V. For instance peeople who have hair falling problem seeking solution of hair fall now recieve it witout searching on stores after watching promotion of oil that stop hair fall.Moreover, many people are busy on their work so they do not know aboyt the crime adn crisis occur in their nation.So,we can make them aware on regarding issue through advertisemnt. Hence, advertisement make life live in a easiest way to number of people in todays date,
On the other hand various drwabacks may be noted.Beacuse of the advertisement on televsion many people becominf lazier and that leads to obesicity. They prefer to watch commercial rather than going to deaprtment stores.On contrary to this, they know that those endorsement on product may be false but still they choose Tv adversement product as a result many people get regret and loss of money as well. In additional, sometime it shows things that contain harmful chemical and inorganic substance where many people are unaware about it while watching it on display so that many people are suffering from health problem like cancer and diabiaties.
To sum Up,advertisement on televeison has many advantages but at the same time there is disadvantages aslo. So drawbacks can be eleiminated if company that contatin dangerous toxic is ban to broacast on television and people choose to buy product by visiting stores and market rather than watching it and buying withou reading the ingredients.
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- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Todai
...helps to obtain the attention of people.Todai, it become one of the eminet tredn that...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...btain the attention of people.Todai, it become one of the eminet tredn that most of th...
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Suggestion: the
...redn that most of the people take it as a best way of marketing and make known to...
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Suggestion: , beacause
...ment on T.V screen. The main One is thaT,beacause of the commercial broadcasting on scree...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... for product in market which makes them more easier to recive their product by watching the...
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... crime adn crisis occur in their nation.So,we can make them aware on regarding iss...
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...rime adn crisis occur in their nation.So,we can make them aware on regarding issue ...
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Suggestion: an
... Hence, advertisement make life live in a easiest way to number of people in toda...
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Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: On
... rather than going to deaprtment stores.On contrary to this, they know that those ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this endorsement' or 'those endorsements'?
Suggestion: this endorsement; those endorsements
...res.On contrary to this, they know that those endorsement on product may be false but still they ...
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Suggestion: , advertisement
... cancer and diabiaties. To sum Up,advertisement on televeison has many advantages but a...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are disadvantages'?
Suggestion: there are disadvantages
...as many advantages but at the same time there is disadvantages aslo. So drawbacks can be eleiminated i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16326530612 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92482167822 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.878343361 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.375 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.875 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135337231861 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096123114483 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122254767505 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771870994015 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573211311695 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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