In this century people, particularly adults tend to sleep less than their ancestors and they are normally awake until midnight. There are a wide range of reasons which affect this behavior. Moreover, it has effect on their bodies and leads to creating various diseases in their bodies. However, it has both pros and cons to do this. In this essay, the aforementioned issue will be discussed.
It is certainly obvious that our body needs to sleep enough and scientists believe 8 hours a day is necessary for all people. A recent study by Stanford University indicated that less than 8 hours a day has irreparable effects on human’s body. In this research they found some diseases such as diabetes of blood pressure due to not enough sleep during a day. To tackle on this problem people should prepare a plan for themselves and sleep in exact time every night. Furthermore, it affects the society because the government has to prepare facilities to diagnose these diseases and cure people.
However, human beings tend to awake in these days especially in recent decades. There are several entertainments or problems that people faced. For instance, in this materialistic world, people have to work hard to augment their incomes. On the other hand, there are a variety of computer games or cafe that people are able to spend their time with them. In addition, invention of electricity leads to increasing efficient time that people can use because previous generations were not able to work at night with no light. Hence, this generation do not sleep enough and they have several interesting works to do.
All in all, in spite of the fact that people want to have fan during the night or use their time during a day, they should consider their body conditions. They should plan and have effort to limit their work or entertainments and pay attention to their body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'fanned'.
Suggestion: fanned
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88679245283 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63259201592 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1562543117 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183026848416 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593145621097 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445217263371 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110949552539 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400611018332 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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