Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Control on waste has become a difficult job. These days we are manufacturing more quantity of waste and it is getting accumulated on this soil. This essay will discuss why the rubbish is getting produced and what the state should do in minimizing this rubbish.
In this modern world, human consumption is increasing wastage on the earth in a drastic way and the level of recycling or destruction is very low, therefore results in the accumulation of rubbish. For illustration, Plastic is used in almost every packaging material of food to keep the product intact and healthy such as water bottles and its demand is rising every day. Astonishingly, the produced plastic is the non-degradable item, hence making conditions even worst for the society in minimizing this rubbish.
In order to control this hazard, the state should restrict those organizations to produce a limited amount or to upgrade the quality of the product. For instance use of biodegradable plastics, which can be controlled with the help of microbes. In addition to that, alternatives to such products are more appropriate such as packagings of water in paper boxes, like tetra packing of milk and milk products. Although the cost of the product will increase, the waste can be eliminated to some extent.
In conclusion, the world is producing rubbish in huge quantity because of the demands of these products are high in this modern world. Therefore, the government should persuade companies to produce other alternatives to stop the formation of more garbage. In the near future, if some steps are not taken quickly, we may have to face adverse impacts on the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a drastic way" with adverb for "drastic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08088235294 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89880322221 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4515371612 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235627472588 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786869180823 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710366541155 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145541507595 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581380431275 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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